Tuesday, May 1, 2007
The Graduation Present
A young man soon graduated from college, and he asked his father to give him a sports car as a present. On the graduated day, and his father gave him a Bible. He felt disappointed and left home. Many years passed, and his job and life were wonderful. One day he got a message that his father was dead. He had to go home and took care of anything. Arranging his father’s stuff, he saw the Bible which his father gave him. He opened it and found the car key that he asked for.
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The Graduation Present-summary peer review
1.What do you like best about your peer’s summary? (Why? How might he or she do more of it?)
He opened it and found the car key that he asked for. The young man found that what he wanted.
2.Is it clear what is being summarized? (i.e. Did your peer list the source, and cite it correctly?)
Yes, it is.
3.Is the thesis of the original essay clear in the summary? (Write out what you think that thesis is.)
Yes, it is.
4.If you have read the original source, did you identify the same thesis? (If not, how does it differ?)
Yes, about the same.
5.Did your peer miss any key points from his or her summary? (If so, what are they?)
In paragraph two, “stormed out of the house, leaving the Bible.”
6.Did your peer include any of his own opinions in his or her summary? (If so, what are they?)
No, she did not.
7.Did your peer include any unimportant details in his or her summary? (If so, what are they?)
No, each sentences are necessary.
8.Were any points in the summary lost? (If so, where and how might it be fixed? Why do you think it might be important?)
On a graduated day, his father gave him a Bible, he felt disappointed and left home.--> On a graduated day, his father gave him a Bible, he felt disappointed who leaving the Bible and left home.
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